Friday, 11 September 2015

I am 
Sat on the bus, thinking,
just for a second.
What life would be like,
for another bus rider

I am
Sat on the bus
looking out, watching,
everyone that goes by,
walking, cycling, running.

I am 
Sat on the bus
waiting for my stop
3 stops. 2 stops. my stop.

I am
Sat on the bus
going work. its a friday.
Tomorrow I go on holiday,
far,far away.

I am 
Sat on the bus. Connecting,
updating,
facebook, twitter, instagram,
like, retweet, double tap.
my stop now, disconnected.

I am
In my own world.
on my own.
Alone.
3 stops. 2 stops. My stop. 

1 comment:

  1. This has some really engaging moments. I love the end-stopped after disconnected. I also like the ending which is very clever, I think. Don't forget punctuation and grammar rules still apply in poems, so you need to say 'it's a Friday' with the apostrophe. Well done though, Paige. Keep writing!

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