I am
Sat on the bus, thinking,
just for a second.
What life would be like,
for another bus rider
I am
Sat on the bus
looking out, watching,
everyone that goes by,
walking, cycling, running.
I am
Sat on the bus
waiting for my stop
3 stops. 2 stops. my stop.
I am
Sat on the bus
going work. its a friday.
Tomorrow I go on holiday,
far,far away.
I am
Sat on the bus. Connecting,
updating,
facebook, twitter, instagram,
like, retweet, double tap.
my stop now, disconnected.
I am
In my own world.
on my own.
Alone.
3 stops. 2 stops. My stop.
This has some really engaging moments. I love the end-stopped after disconnected. I also like the ending which is very clever, I think. Don't forget punctuation and grammar rules still apply in poems, so you need to say 'it's a Friday' with the apostrophe. Well done though, Paige. Keep writing!
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